Sun is falling down
But promise to rise again
See you tommorrow.
Waters moving on
Hurrily follow the others
Going down and down.
Stepping Grassy field
Recieving the cool breeze
Wacthing various clouds.
Opening the book
Reading ordinary text
thinking many things.
Time to go to bed
As you fluff pillows and spread blankets
You would close your eye.
There's little mistakes in syllable
ReplyDeletebut nice Haiku
The second, third and the last one, in the middle, the syllables are more or less than 7. I like your expressions in the poem though.
ReplyDeleteYou need to work on....
ReplyDelete1 your syllables in your words
what is good...
1 Your way of discribing in you haiku
2 nice fallowing the line rule