My goodness my goodness so many works to do
As the time pass I do my assgnment tick
The homeworks began to pressure me tock
Your brain nerves become nervous of it tick
You try to calm yourself down tock
When you see the clock, you panic about the time tick
Finally starting to do work like a bee tock
Tap tap tapt tpa tap typing you keyboard tick
I did it and as you wake up next day
My goodness My goodness new works to do.
I can see the patterns you made.
ReplyDeletegosh I really agree with you!! I like the way you used tick and tock. Nice poetic devices
ReplyDeletenice try trying to put tick and tock at the end of each lines, but in some lines, the tick and tock seems way too random and unfit for the sentence, such as the 7th line, which you stated "...like a bee tock", in which tock does not make any sense
ReplyDeletei enjoyed the way you put in your rhyeme scheme with the whole tick and tock thing. It was really creative. I enjoyed your poetic devices
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