Sunday, 22 August 2010

Story of Scream

Story of scream

Jaecheong B-block 8/20/10

Yes, this is the story of me, by the way, don’t ask my name. If you want to call me, just call me ‘Whyahooligantorpedopelican’, oh, you’ve just decided to not call my superior name. This story goes back about 1years ago. At then, I was pick pocketing some old people’s money, I mean, I was famous before. Once, there was some fancy old women came cross me, so I came to her and did my job. I looked and saw my loots, and you know what it was? A real weird looking tablet. At least I thought that I can sell this to the museum or something, but a few hours later, some hunky looking bodyguards ran in and tried to capture me. OF course I ran, and I know this place more than them, after I got rid of those pests, I began to think that old woman may be a real jackpot and I can rake her money using this thing. And I went to buy the coffee, and I see myself on the TV, a dead or alive style. People began to yell and treat me like some uncool robber, I ran, and the bodyguards now riding a van started to chase me, and caught in no time. I was brought to some area that was restricted, and that old woman, the one I stole came to me. What she said was un-understandable, talking about some political or money, whatever. Soon, she ordered her man to find the tablet, but who I’m? ‘Whyahooligantorpedopelican!’ Yes, I hid the thing in safe! So she made me go where the thing is for making no physical, etc harms on me. And I came to the slums where I hid my tablet. The place where I hid it was safe, only too safe. The bodyguards tried, but were too dumb. So I took the thing out, but this unlucky pebble made the tablet in ka boom! “Ahhhhhhhh!” “Noooooooo!” the screams went on for long and now, I’m in the prison where I have 3meals a day and a bed.

2 comments:

  1. So... I don't understand why she hid her name.

    ReplyDelete
  2. I think that the ideas are kind of disconnected and a little bit hard to understand. Also you could use more imagery.
    However your topic is narrow and makes sense.

    ReplyDelete